Sep. 5th, 2009
Well, there's one scene...
Sep. 5th, 2009 01:20 pmvastly improved. I love Ben when he's conflicted. Poor guy has no idea which way is up in that scene. And, contrary to Popular Opinion, the Healing Vagina isn't all that. It is, in fact, making him worse, not better.
Mainly because it's the wrong vagina. And thus, he hates himself. *evil laughter*
My climax is teh suxxors, though. It needs MOAR.
More what? I don't know. I just know it's...flat. Lacks punch. I need to look at the language of it, I guess. It's a good outline of what happens, but I think there may be more telling than showing there. I'll let that percolate for awhile.
Mainly because it's the wrong vagina. And thus, he hates himself. *evil laughter*
My climax is teh suxxors, though. It needs MOAR.
More what? I don't know. I just know it's...flat. Lacks punch. I need to look at the language of it, I guess. It's a good outline of what happens, but I think there may be more telling than showing there. I'll let that percolate for awhile.
Well, there's one scene...
Sep. 5th, 2009 01:20 pmvastly improved. I love Ben when he's conflicted. Poor guy has no idea which way is up in that scene. And, contrary to Popular Opinion, the Healing Vagina isn't all that. It is, in fact, making him worse, not better.
Mainly because it's the wrong vagina. And thus, he hates himself. *evil laughter*
My climax is teh suxxors, though. It needs MOAR.
More what? I don't know. I just know it's...flat. Lacks punch. I need to look at the language of it, I guess. It's a good outline of what happens, but I think there may be more telling than showing there. I'll let that percolate for awhile.
Mainly because it's the wrong vagina. And thus, he hates himself. *evil laughter*
My climax is teh suxxors, though. It needs MOAR.
More what? I don't know. I just know it's...flat. Lacks punch. I need to look at the language of it, I guess. It's a good outline of what happens, but I think there may be more telling than showing there. I'll let that percolate for awhile.
TELEVISION.
Sep. 5th, 2009 08:03 pm'Tis fall. I know this because it's barely eight o'clock and it's mostly dark.
This is depressing to me because that means that Old Man Winter will be along any time. Woe.
HOWEVER.
It also means that my summer off from watching television is going to come to a crashing halt. Here's what my viewing schedule looks like:
Monday: House, Heroes, Castle. Yes, I'm still watching Heroes. Shut up.
Tuesday: Nothing!
Wednesday: CSI:NY. Or at least, we'd be watching this if we weren't so far behind that we have no idea what's going on with the characters. Will probably get dropped from our schedule. Which is a shame, it's a good show.
Thursday: Fringe, The Mentalist. Bones would be there too, but, again, woefully behind and little interest in catching up.
Friday: Dollhouse, Numb3rs.
Saturday and Sunday: Nothing. Except NASCAR.
Better Off Ted, Chuck, and Lost are going to be mid-season replacements. That's... a lot of TV.
This is depressing to me because that means that Old Man Winter will be along any time. Woe.
HOWEVER.
It also means that my summer off from watching television is going to come to a crashing halt. Here's what my viewing schedule looks like:
Monday: House, Heroes, Castle. Yes, I'm still watching Heroes. Shut up.
Tuesday: Nothing!
Wednesday: CSI:NY. Or at least, we'd be watching this if we weren't so far behind that we have no idea what's going on with the characters. Will probably get dropped from our schedule. Which is a shame, it's a good show.
Thursday: Fringe, The Mentalist. Bones would be there too, but, again, woefully behind and little interest in catching up.
Friday: Dollhouse, Numb3rs.
Saturday and Sunday: Nothing. Except NASCAR.
Better Off Ted, Chuck, and Lost are going to be mid-season replacements. That's... a lot of TV.
TELEVISION.
Sep. 5th, 2009 08:03 pm'Tis fall. I know this because it's barely eight o'clock and it's mostly dark.
This is depressing to me because that means that Old Man Winter will be along any time. Woe.
HOWEVER.
It also means that my summer off from watching television is going to come to a crashing halt. Here's what my viewing schedule looks like:
Monday: House, Heroes, Castle. Yes, I'm still watching Heroes. Shut up.
Tuesday: Nothing!
Wednesday: CSI:NY. Or at least, we'd be watching this if we weren't so far behind that we have no idea what's going on with the characters. Will probably get dropped from our schedule. Which is a shame, it's a good show.
Thursday: Fringe, The Mentalist. Bones would be there too, but, again, woefully behind and little interest in catching up.
Friday: Dollhouse, Numb3rs.
Saturday and Sunday: Nothing. Except NASCAR.
Better Off Ted, Chuck, and Lost are going to be mid-season replacements. That's... a lot of TV.
This is depressing to me because that means that Old Man Winter will be along any time. Woe.
HOWEVER.
It also means that my summer off from watching television is going to come to a crashing halt. Here's what my viewing schedule looks like:
Monday: House, Heroes, Castle. Yes, I'm still watching Heroes. Shut up.
Tuesday: Nothing!
Wednesday: CSI:NY. Or at least, we'd be watching this if we weren't so far behind that we have no idea what's going on with the characters. Will probably get dropped from our schedule. Which is a shame, it's a good show.
Thursday: Fringe, The Mentalist. Bones would be there too, but, again, woefully behind and little interest in catching up.
Friday: Dollhouse, Numb3rs.
Saturday and Sunday: Nothing. Except NASCAR.
Better Off Ted, Chuck, and Lost are going to be mid-season replacements. That's... a lot of TV.