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I've turned my werewolf loose on a bunch of terrorists, after not!Tony's GPS gambit has actually failed in this version of events.
Yeah, they're dead.
And now I'm wondering if this is the "obvious" payoff, because damn if she didn't go through them like tissue paper. I don't care if you've got automatic weapons, if you're firing them in panic mode as a wolf the size of a pony comes at you, most of your rounds are going into the ceiling. And if you don't have silver bullets, a werewolf might be annoyed, but it won't be mortally wounded. As pissed as she is, she won't even notice.
So, the whole thing just struck me as being, well, too easy, drill sergeant.
The big challenge in this scene was writing it from the wolf POV.
And now I have to decide if she needs to bite him to save him...
Current word count: 14,568
Yeah, they're dead.
And now I'm wondering if this is the "obvious" payoff, because damn if she didn't go through them like tissue paper. I don't care if you've got automatic weapons, if you're firing them in panic mode as a wolf the size of a pony comes at you, most of your rounds are going into the ceiling. And if you don't have silver bullets, a werewolf might be annoyed, but it won't be mortally wounded. As pissed as she is, she won't even notice.
So, the whole thing just struck me as being, well, too easy, drill sergeant.
The big challenge in this scene was writing it from the wolf POV.
And now I have to decide if she needs to bite him to save him...
Current word count: 14,568
