THE END.

Sep. 15th, 2014 12:41 pm
agilebrit: (werewolf)
I have just placed an END at the bottom of the Fleasel Story. Huzzah. Just under 3300 words, and I haven't put Chambliss in that final scene yet, but... I might not. It's a nice little story as it sits; I'll ask my betas if they think he needs to be there.

I went from loathing this story to loving it in the space of a few hours. I've spent most of the writing of this thing flailing around trying to figure out exactly what Alex wants, and the fleasel itself, while amusing, wasn't really enough to carry the story.

But once it became about a man's relationship with his wife, the whole thing came together. I AM WELL PLEASED.

In other news, I didn't place in Q3 of this year's Writers of the Future with Hell's Process Server--all I got was a straight rejection. So weird. I don't even know, anymore. I'll probably send Time-Traveling Ben to Q4; Dave really seems to like him.
agilebrit: (Over My Head)
Finish the first draft of the tattoo story. I'm at the climax right now.

See if I can re-work Hell's Process Server so the spec element is obvious from the first page.

Update my RP activity logs.

Tag this character.

Broken down like that, it doesn't seem like much. I can totally do it!

THE END.

Jan. 20th, 2014 01:14 pm
agilebrit: (Guri praise the Lord)
Hell's Process Server has an END at the bottom of it! A hair under 5500 words, which is short for me. However, this thing will grow in re-writes, because it needs more description, but I still think it will stay under 6000, so I am well-pleased with it.

This marks my fourth story with angels in it. I'm sensing a trend in my writing of writing stories that no one will buy, ever, but I don't think it's a bad thing. Maybe I'll be That Werewolf and Angel Writer.
agilebrit: (Guri praying)
So. I'm in the midst of scribbling the thing I'm calling "Hell's Process Server," and I have a very spiffy outline and it was going swimmingly...

Until my protag's Guardian Angel tapped me on the shoulder and said, "Hey. What about me. You really think I'm going to let my Charge go traipsing into the bowels of Hell itself without me. How about no." (No, those weren't questions. He was quite firm.)

So I've added a character who isn't in the outline. That's just great.

And then, for some reason, I couldn't seem to get going today, and it finally struck me:

If you're a demon escorting a mortal through Hell, are you going to walk him through the middle of the Torments of the Damned, or will you avoid all that stuff? Because, let's face it, if you're suddenly face-planted with Eternal Consequences for bad behavior, that's kind of a cue to straighten out your life. Right? And that's the last thing a demon would want.

This actually simplifies the story, because now I don't have to pick which Torments the demon escorts him past; we can just go Straight to Lucifer's Throne while Gaap and Khatuliel snark at each other and the GPS keeps yelling "Recalculating!"

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