THE END: Mk2
Oct. 12th, 2013 05:14 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
agilebritCyborg werewolf has another END at the bottom. Our little overnight trip to Moab shook the rest of the thing out of my head, and I finished this draft on the drive home between Green River and Wellington. And I'm actually happy with this one.
Moab, as always, was beautiful. We couldn't have asked for better weather. We drove up the Poison Spider trail yesterday and did Moab Rim today. I swear, I saw more ground squirrels (three) on Poison Spider than we normally do in an entire week. I also have a love/hate relationship with Moab Rim. It's awesome and technical and the view is amazeballs, but it also scares the shit out of me because it's tippy and close to the edge of a cliff, and one wrong move will end your day in disaster. So. Yeah. I've never seen anyone actually lose it there, but damn.
Moab, as always, was beautiful. We couldn't have asked for better weather. We drove up the Poison Spider trail yesterday and did Moab Rim today. I swear, I saw more ground squirrels (three) on Poison Spider than we normally do in an entire week. I also have a love/hate relationship with Moab Rim. It's awesome and technical and the view is amazeballs, but it also scares the shit out of me because it's tippy and close to the edge of a cliff, and one wrong move will end your day in disaster. So. Yeah. I've never seen anyone actually lose it there, but damn.
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Date: 2013-10-14 02:46 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-14 07:21 pm (UTC)*headdesk*
The story itself is fine. My mechanics are awful. Sentence structure? What is that? I guess that's what edits are for.
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Date: 2013-10-14 08:59 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-10-14 09:02 pm (UTC)