- Fri, 13:17: Maybe I should print this and go after it with a red pen the old-fashioned way. THIRTY-TWO PAGES. And you novelists can stop laughing at me.
- Fri, 22:49: Second editing pass done. 171 words whacked out. This is what I get for writing spare in the first place. Still need to excise 2000+. Ugh.
- Sat, 08:45: Today, more editing. Let's see how many words I can weed-whack today. #amediting Good news is, I love this story SO MUCH.
- Sat, 11:51: "...with a pleased smile on his face." Well, YES. Where ELSE would a smile be? #headdesk #amediting