Snippet Saturday!

[agilebrit]

At the lovely and effulgent difrancis's LJ.

Here's mine, which is a piece from something I'm going to throw up as a DVD extra for the not!kkbb/im novelthing, one of these days. No, it's not the sex scene. You no can haz.

Comments

[lady-moriel.livejournal.com]

I posted one too, sort of, except it's like two sentences and I don't even know where it belongs, so...whatever.

Also, you should know that your novelthing is EATING MY LIFE, AGAIN. Just like it did the first time, only now I was just going through and adding comments to places I'd already marked to comment, and ended up re-reading the whole thing. Well, sort of, because I'm like halfway through now and I HAVE SO MANY THINGS TO DO AND ALL I WANT TO DO IS READ IT AND DUDE, I'M TYPING THIS ON THE BATHROOM COUNTER BECAUSE I BROUGHT IT IN HERE TO READ.

So...yeah. You've definitely got the compulsively-readable part down. >_

[agilebrit.livejournal.com]

*evil laughter* Well, at least you're enjoying it (I hope).

[lady-moriel.livejournal.com]

Oh, definitely. That's the problem. >_<

I hope some of these comments are useful, too...based on things you've said in your blog, I think you've already made changes to things I was going to point out, so hopefully at least some of my comments won't be repeats from what you've heard from other people.