First three paragraphs...
Feb. 25th, 2009 11:04 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
agilebritAre now the first... *counts* seven paragraphs. They are better paragraphs. I am showing rather than telling. Not!Harry's sarcasm circuits are firing somewhat, even in the midst of panic attacks while people are hitting him. And rather than spending 375 words describing what's happening to him, I'm up around 650, poor fellow.
This is a vast improvement. Go, me.
I also need to fix the Bad Guy's death scene so it's less boring and more evocative. I have a thing I want to stick at the end which shouldn't take more than a sentence.
And I've cracked 92,000 words. Go, me.
This is a vast improvement. Go, me.
I also need to fix the Bad Guy's death scene so it's less boring and more evocative. I have a thing I want to stick at the end which shouldn't take more than a sentence.
And I've cracked 92,000 words. Go, me.
