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agilebritI've looked at my timeline again in the not!kkbb/im thing.
Because I've been hunting for a way to stick all that corporate bullshit in earlier so my ending doesn't drag out too long, which is, frankly, what it's doing now.
The problem is that the corporate bullshit is important corporate bullshit, and not!Tony's board isn't going to put up with his irresponsibility (as they see it) indefinitely--and that board meeting at the end where he pwns them all can't happen anywhere else but where it does because he's busy, and also because all the information isn't quite in place yet.
So. I'm either stuck with dragging out the end the way I've already done, or setting it up better beforehand. I can set it up better beforehand, no problem--I've got a spot in the timeline where it fits perfectly, in fact. But I'm afraid that it'll still drag out too long in the end.
*massive, heavy sigh*
Well. I guess I'll stick the preliminary stuff in there and then see how it sounds once I've done that...
Because I've been hunting for a way to stick all that corporate bullshit in earlier so my ending doesn't drag out too long, which is, frankly, what it's doing now.
The problem is that the corporate bullshit is important corporate bullshit, and not!Tony's board isn't going to put up with his irresponsibility (as they see it) indefinitely--and that board meeting at the end where he pwns them all can't happen anywhere else but where it does because he's busy, and also because all the information isn't quite in place yet.
So. I'm either stuck with dragging out the end the way I've already done, or setting it up better beforehand. I can set it up better beforehand, no problem--I've got a spot in the timeline where it fits perfectly, in fact. But I'm afraid that it'll still drag out too long in the end.
*massive, heavy sigh*
Well. I guess I'll stick the preliminary stuff in there and then see how it sounds once I've done that...
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Date: 2009-01-12 11:45 pm (UTC)Yeah...
Also, I just finished going through it again. Still hate the ending. *grumps*