There's my 500 words. And then some.
There's 59K. And then some.
There's a marriage proposal. And an acceptance.
And now their lives can go to shit once again. Because that's how I roll.
Because I'm mean and ought to be shot.
Also, the beginnings of an endgame may be making themselves known.
And pretty soon I'm going to have to decide if not!Harmony lives or dies. Because I've been all about hurting not!Harry in this thing, and it might be high time to give the poor guy a little comfort. On the other hand, the image of her dying in his arms after taking a bullet meant for him and then him wolfing permanently and heading for the hills is kind of pinging me pretty good too.
See? SEE how mean I am?
There's 59K. And then some.
There's a marriage proposal. And an acceptance.
And now their lives can go to shit once again. Because that's how I roll.
Because I'm mean and ought to be shot.
Also, the beginnings of an endgame may be making themselves known.
And pretty soon I'm going to have to decide if not!Harmony lives or dies. Because I've been all about hurting not!Harry in this thing, and it might be high time to give the poor guy a little comfort. On the other hand, the image of her dying in his arms after taking a bullet meant for him and then him wolfing permanently and heading for the hills is kind of pinging me pretty good too.
See? SEE how mean I am?
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Date: 2008-11-16 10:01 pm (UTC)I think the story sounds pretty good. You could write a sequel where not!Harry comes down from the hills to exact revenge or something like that. *grins*
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Date: 2008-11-16 10:16 pm (UTC)Yeah, I'm going to have to decide soon if I'm writing a romance or a tragedy. Joss Whedon has rubbed off WAY too much on me.
I actually have a sequel, which is about not!Tony and not!Pepper, and which was written before this. And hopefully the market it's sitting at will get back to me soon and tell me that they want to buy it...
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Date: 2008-11-17 01:35 am (UTC)Joss Whedon is love. =)
And oh wow! Best wishes on selling your novel dear.
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Date: 2008-11-17 02:02 am (UTC)Joss is love, but there is such a thing as putting a character through too much pain. *eyes this story* SERIOUSLY.
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Date: 2008-11-17 02:14 am (UTC)LOL
Good luck!
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Date: 2008-11-17 02:59 am (UTC)