Okay, I've asked myself...

[agilebrit]

"What could go wrong for my characters in this scene?"

And things have gone from "merely bad" to "catastrophic" in the blink of an eye.

Oh, not!Harry.

Seriously, now I'm asking myself "how can I dial this back?" Because this...is bad. Very very bad.

Comments

[appomattoxco.livejournal.com]

Remind me never to get you mad. :0)

[agilebrit.livejournal.com]

Poor not!Harry. He's nicely fulfilling his function of getting the shit beat out of him in Every. Single. Scene.