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agilebritBack to the drawing board on the drabble. The Hubby had a sort of "eh" reaction to it, and ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
ericjamesstone rightly pointed out that it's really too vague to be effective.
And I tend to agree. Something like this needs to either make the reader laugh, or be a gut-punch. This is neither. It's okay, but it's not great.
I used to be the Drabble Queen. I once cranked out thirty drabbles in a week. I can do this.
ericjamesstone rightly pointed out that it's really too vague to be effective.And I tend to agree. Something like this needs to either make the reader laugh, or be a gut-punch. This is neither. It's okay, but it's not great.
I used to be the Drabble Queen. I once cranked out thirty drabbles in a week. I can do this.
