I printed out the A&tS story...

[agilebrit]

And it doesn't suck nearly as much as I remember it sucking. There's some stuff needs tweaking here and there, and maybe I'll run it past the Hubby one more time, but it may be nearly ready to go out again.

There's just that one paragraph that's really, really bugging me. Boring, crappy exposition. Needs fixing. Badly.

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[ahmedakhan.livejournal.com]

So where do you plan to submit the story, once done?

[agilebrit.livejournal.com]

Asimov's, first. Aim high, I say.