And the new version...
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agilebrit...has an "END" at the bottom of it. I think it's a better story. I may need to add a little more emotion to it than it has, but I've only got a 47-word leeway, so I don't know. I'll poke it again tomorrow and see if I still like it.
In the meantime...
Brisco County, Jr!
In the meantime...
Brisco County, Jr!
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