Crappity crap crap CRAP.
Aug. 5th, 2007 10:27 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
agilebritI love the new hook I have for the Merc&theSnake fic. It's fabulous.
HOWEVER.
I can't help but think that cutting her throat as a "distraction" (even though medical technology is such that she'll only be mostly dead) *nods to William Goldman* is a bit...
Extreme.
I need to raise the stakes somehow.
And...I think I may have just figured out how.
Righty-ho. *cracks knuckles*
ETA: That means I have to set up the medical technology earlier in the story. And... I just figured out how to do that too. Go, me.
HOWEVER.
I can't help but think that cutting her throat as a "distraction" (even though medical technology is such that she'll only be mostly dead) *nods to William Goldman* is a bit...
Extreme.
I need to raise the stakes somehow.
And...I think I may have just figured out how.
Righty-ho. *cracks knuckles*
ETA: That means I have to set up the medical technology earlier in the story. And... I just figured out how to do that too. Go, me.
