And the last element...

of the hitman!Ben story has just fallen into place.

I have no idea if I'll be able to pull this off. But it gives me the vampire aspect without it actually being a vampire aspect. It's not like chickie-poo knows the difference between a real vampire and a guy who's faking it with fang implants...

And the last element...

of the hitman!Ben story has just fallen into place.

I have no idea if I'll be able to pull this off. But it gives me the vampire aspect without it actually being a vampire aspect. It's not like chickie-poo knows the difference between a real vampire and a guy who's faking it with fang implants...

HAH.

Done revision is done.

I still have to read it over and make sure it all scans with the New and Improved™ Plot. But, yeah, this is so much better OMG. My loaded werewolf went off, and this time the bad guy didn't die. Ben's Crowning Moment of Awesome is when he doesn't rip the guy's face off. It's an exercise of monumental self-control. And he manages it without Janni in the room. So, this is progress of sorts for him.

And I still need to add in the part where Ben finds the film online. *evil laughter* Maybe. It's under 9K. I'd like to keep it there.

*dives back in*

HAH.

Done revision is done.

I still have to read it over and make sure it all scans with the New and Improved™ Plot. But, yeah, this is so much better OMG. My loaded werewolf went off, and this time the bad guy didn't die. Ben's Crowning Moment of Awesome is when he doesn't rip the guy's face off. It's an exercise of monumental self-control. And he manages it without Janni in the room. So, this is progress of sorts for him.

And I still need to add in the part where Ben finds the film online. *evil laughter* Maybe. It's under 9K. I'd like to keep it there.

*dives back in*