And now I'm to the point where the rubber meets the road. There's not a whole lot more I can do to Ben on the Prison Island, so I've now moved to the part where he's actually Home and Safe.
The problem is, I'm not sure what to do with him at this point.
His New Reality was the Awful Place and his relationship with Angeline. He was there for two and a half months, give or take, getting every single one of his buttons pushed, sometimes multiple times a day. He got deconstructed far enough that he was violating his own morals. Daily panic attacks and nightly nightmares were the order of the day--this, after he'd gotten both under some semblance of control. He's had the severest of severe setbacks.
How does he come back from that?
Does he come back from that?
Because not only is this a horrible setback, it's wrapped up in his own guilt about violating his own morals. He might not even think he deserves to come back from that.
And if he doesn't deserve to come back from it, where does that leave him? Janni is perfectly willing to catch him as he falls, but what if he actively avoids her arms and crashes to the ground without a parachute? Ben in a mental institution is not where I wanted to end up with this.
The whole series has been Romance, rather than Tragedy. I don't want this one to go in a Tragic direction. At the same time, I've learned over the years that fighting the Muse on stuff like this is useless and makes what comes out of the keyboard suck.
*repeats mantra* That which does not kill us makes us stronger.
And that goes for Ben too. If he can survive this, he can come out on the other side...well. Not necessarily "whole." But less broken than he was here.
And then, of course, there's the question of What Do I Do With a Problem Like Angeline? Killing her off (even if she gets a death that's all heroic and shit) seems like a massive copout.
Oh, god.
agilebrit is far too invested in this character, y/y?
The problem is, I'm not sure what to do with him at this point.
His New Reality was the Awful Place and his relationship with Angeline. He was there for two and a half months, give or take, getting every single one of his buttons pushed, sometimes multiple times a day. He got deconstructed far enough that he was violating his own morals. Daily panic attacks and nightly nightmares were the order of the day--this, after he'd gotten both under some semblance of control. He's had the severest of severe setbacks.
How does he come back from that?
Does he come back from that?
Because not only is this a horrible setback, it's wrapped up in his own guilt about violating his own morals. He might not even think he deserves to come back from that.
And if he doesn't deserve to come back from it, where does that leave him? Janni is perfectly willing to catch him as he falls, but what if he actively avoids her arms and crashes to the ground without a parachute? Ben in a mental institution is not where I wanted to end up with this.
The whole series has been Romance, rather than Tragedy. I don't want this one to go in a Tragic direction. At the same time, I've learned over the years that fighting the Muse on stuff like this is useless and makes what comes out of the keyboard suck.
*repeats mantra* That which does not kill us makes us stronger.
And that goes for Ben too. If he can survive this, he can come out on the other side...well. Not necessarily "whole." But less broken than he was here.
And then, of course, there's the question of What Do I Do With a Problem Like Angeline? Killing her off (even if she gets a death that's all heroic and shit) seems like a massive copout.
Oh, god.
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