Having just complicated my life...

I give you...

a snippet.

This segment has added over two thousand words to my count, and I'm going to have to go back in and (probably) add more details about any further showers he takes and how he attempts to overcome this.

Yay for a three-hour window I needed to fill within the story.

Having just complicated my life...

I give you...

a snippet.

This segment has added over two thousand words to my count, and I'm going to have to go back in and (probably) add more details about any further showers he takes and how he attempts to overcome this.

Yay for a three-hour window I needed to fill within the story.

FINALLY.

The inbetween scenes are done and plugged into the main novelthing. I gave not!Harry and not!Harmony their own scenes and some nice character moments.

I've also got something of a timeline of when not!Tony hired not!Perry, and now (as texanfan pointed out) I really need to figure out the whole "industrial espionage" thing a little better, because it's weak right now. But a timeline is a start! I've decided that not!Tony hired not!Perry about three days ago, and not!Harry was taken two days ago, so...yeah. And I should probably emphasize a little more that not!Harmony only occasionally works for not!Perry and hasn't been brought in on this one at all.

And someday, sometime, I'm going to start referring to these characters by their actual!names.

Also, 89,700 words. It's creeping up, slowly but surely.

FINALLY.

The inbetween scenes are done and plugged into the main novelthing. I gave not!Harry and not!Harmony their own scenes and some nice character moments.

I've also got something of a timeline of when not!Tony hired not!Perry, and now (as texanfan pointed out) I really need to figure out the whole "industrial espionage" thing a little better, because it's weak right now. But a timeline is a start! I've decided that not!Tony hired not!Perry about three days ago, and not!Harry was taken two days ago, so...yeah. And I should probably emphasize a little more that not!Harmony only occasionally works for not!Perry and hasn't been brought in on this one at all.

And someday, sometime, I'm going to start referring to these characters by their actual!names.

Also, 89,700 words. It's creeping up, slowly but surely.