*bangs head on keyboard*

What does it say about me that I'm still tweaking the first three paragraphs of this thing? You'd think they'd be perfect by now, but NOOOOOOOOOOOO.

Also, the more I think about it, the more I think that not!Harry really should want a shower in that first scene where he wakes up. Because how cleaned up could they really get him, and YUCK. Of course, between being weak from blood loss, and the narcolepsy from the nanotech, he wouldn't be too steady on his pins, but I'm pretty sure he's got blood in his hair and under his nails and the creases of his elbows and other uncomfortable places...

Not!Harmony could help him.

I should probably figure out a graceful way to put that in.

*bangs head on keyboard*

What does it say about me that I'm still tweaking the first three paragraphs of this thing? You'd think they'd be perfect by now, but NOOOOOOOOOOOO.

Also, the more I think about it, the more I think that not!Harry really should want a shower in that first scene where he wakes up. Because how cleaned up could they really get him, and YUCK. Of course, between being weak from blood loss, and the narcolepsy from the nanotech, he wouldn't be too steady on his pins, but I'm pretty sure he's got blood in his hair and under his nails and the creases of his elbows and other uncomfortable places...

Not!Harmony could help him.

I should probably figure out a graceful way to put that in.