And there's the Board meeting missed...

I'm cooking with grease now. *evil laughter*

Of course, now I have to figure out just how I'm going to do not!Pepper's scene where she attempts (unsuccessfully) to smooth things over with the Board. Because the scene is already from her POV, and then not!Tony and DocOC disappear into the operating theater with not!Harry, and we switch to them, because, um, yeah.

I'm afraid that the action will come to a screeching halt if I follow her into the teleconference room. But this needs doing. ARGH.

This may get into "show, don't tell" territory. Because I could skip the stuff at the teleconference and then just have Alex ask her about it later. HOWEVER. If I don't, if I go into the room and have the confrontation, then it sets up the players better for the denouement later, when not!Tony goes in, kicks ass, and takes names.

This might also ramp up the tension better for the thing with not!Harry, if I play it right, because not!Pepper could also be worrying about what's going on there while she's trying to placate the Board.

Hm. Yes. I just hope I'm good enough to pull this off...

And there's the Board meeting missed...

I'm cooking with grease now. *evil laughter*

Of course, now I have to figure out just how I'm going to do not!Pepper's scene where she attempts (unsuccessfully) to smooth things over with the Board. Because the scene is already from her POV, and then not!Tony and DocOC disappear into the operating theater with not!Harry, and we switch to them, because, um, yeah.

I'm afraid that the action will come to a screeching halt if I follow her into the teleconference room. But this needs doing. ARGH.

This may get into "show, don't tell" territory. Because I could skip the stuff at the teleconference and then just have Alex ask her about it later. HOWEVER. If I don't, if I go into the room and have the confrontation, then it sets up the players better for the denouement later, when not!Tony goes in, kicks ass, and takes names.

This might also ramp up the tension better for the thing with not!Harry, if I play it right, because not!Pepper could also be worrying about what's going on there while she's trying to placate the Board.

Hm. Yes. I just hope I'm good enough to pull this off...

Boy, it's amazing what you can accomplish...

with no shiny interwebs to distract you.

The Corporate Bullshit™ portion of the not!kkbb/im thing is...pretty much done.

I may still have to tweak one meeting time to before that Ugly Confrontation at the end so the End doesn't drag out, but...

Er, wait. No, I can't actually do that, because not!Tony blows off a meeting on the morning of the Ugly Confrontation. Crap. Nevermind. What I may do instead is just have him skip the intervening teleconference and schedule a face-to-face instead.

Dammit. Need to do another read-through to see if it all hangs together...

Boy, it's amazing what you can accomplish...

with no shiny interwebs to distract you.

The Corporate Bullshit™ portion of the not!kkbb/im thing is...pretty much done.

I may still have to tweak one meeting time to before that Ugly Confrontation at the end so the End doesn't drag out, but...

Er, wait. No, I can't actually do that, because not!Tony blows off a meeting on the morning of the Ugly Confrontation. Crap. Nevermind. What I may do instead is just have him skip the intervening teleconference and schedule a face-to-face instead.

Dammit. Need to do another read-through to see if it all hangs together...