Yeah, this is probably getting old to y'all...

*whines*

Okay, so the format of this...thing is that it's first person, but both River and Illyria. I set off the POV change by using past tense and normal type for River, and present tense and italics for Illyria. Which is fine and good in small doses.

This final scene is Illyria's POV. And it's long. I'm wondering if the italics are going to start burning my readers' eyes.

*bangs head on keyboard*

It. Shouldn't. Be. This. Hard. Dammit.

ETA: And right after I posted this, I stuck a "the end" at the bottom of the thing. Heh.

Yeah, this is probably getting old to y'all...

*whines*

Okay, so the format of this...thing is that it's first person, but both River and Illyria. I set off the POV change by using past tense and normal type for River, and present tense and italics for Illyria. Which is fine and good in small doses.

This final scene is Illyria's POV. And it's long. I'm wondering if the italics are going to start burning my readers' eyes.

*bangs head on keyboard*

It. Shouldn't. Be. This. Hard. Dammit.

ETA: And right after I posted this, I stuck a "the end" at the bottom of the thing. Heh.

I come bearing fic...

And only three days late. Yayness.

Title: Starting from Scratch
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Firefly/Angel crossover
Rating: PG-13 (default)
Length: Short story (around 5500 words)
Disclaimer: Joss is the genius behind these characters; I am but a lowly follower. I make no money from any of this, so please don't sue me.
Feedback: Concrit adored! If you see something that can be improved upon, please let me know, even if it's only a typo.
Written for: cya_ficathon. Request was for a Firefly crossover, with Spike, Illyria, River, and Jayne, a job gone bad, and someone getting shot. Bonus points for Wes, Doyle, or Lorne.
Notes: Takes place post-Ariel in the FireflyVerse and at the tail end of NFA in the AngelVerse. Major characters are Illyria, Spike, Lorne, Jayne, River, and Mal. Many thanks to the flist and especially to bigsciencybrain for putting up with my whining about this story.

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( Grief for Wesley and joy of battle war within me... )

I come bearing fic...

And only three days late. Yayness.

Title: Starting from Scratch
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Firefly/Angel crossover
Rating: PG-13 (default)
Length: Short story (around 5500 words)
Disclaimer: Joss is the genius behind these characters; I am but a lowly follower. I make no money from any of this, so please don't sue me.
Feedback: Concrit adored! If you see something that can be improved upon, please let me know, even if it's only a typo.
Written for: cya_ficathon. Request was for a Firefly crossover, with Spike, Illyria, River, and Jayne, a job gone bad, and someone getting shot. Bonus points for Wes, Doyle, or Lorne.
Notes: Takes place post-Ariel in the FireflyVerse and at the tail end of NFA in the AngelVerse. Major characters are Illyria, Spike, Lorne, Jayne, River, and Mal. Many thanks to the flist and especially to bigsciencybrain for putting up with my whining about this story.

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( Grief for Wesley and joy of battle war within me... )