My tweets

[agilebrit]

• Tue, 16:05: That moment when you realize that you had a reveal about seven scenes too early & debate fixing it, or integrating it. #amwriting
• Tue, 17:10: Well, there's yesterday's word count in the can, anyway. *headdesk* At least my characters are behaving again. #amwriting
• Wed, 10:10: 99-cent Bookbub promo of "Largely Deceased," a horror antho containing my #zombie story "Daddy's Little Girl." https://t.co/xr9giJQYGf
• Wed, 10:33: Friendly reminder to readers: Reviews are lifeblood on Amazon, and a single sentence is sufficient. Make an author's day!

Comments

[litlover12.livejournal.com]

The early reveal sounds like Hitchcock's dilemma with "Vertigo." (In that case, I think it worked well.)