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agilebritHave now completed my third major revision of Hitman!Ben. It's knocking on 10K. As long as it doesn't go over, I'm fine with it, but it's really close to 10K, which means that when I add something, that means I have to go in with the weedwhacker and hack something out.
I'm running out of things to hack out.
And now I'm running into a situation where I've read over the damn thing so many times it makes my eyes glaze over, and I'm skimming, and this is bad because I need to know if it all hangs together at least semi-coherently and if I'm giving too much away and gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
I managed two nods to KKBB in it. Of course, there's the aforementioned "your case and my case are the same case" thing. But I also managed to mention the "five feet of separation rule." This makes me unreasonably happy.
I'm running out of things to hack out.
And now I'm running into a situation where I've read over the damn thing so many times it makes my eyes glaze over, and I'm skimming, and this is bad because I need to know if it all hangs together at least semi-coherently and if I'm giving too much away and gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
I managed two nods to KKBB in it. Of course, there's the aforementioned "your case and my case are the same case" thing. But I also managed to mention the "five feet of separation rule." This makes me unreasonably happy.
