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agilebrit*pwns Faerie Show fic*
New ending is ended. I like it better. Not everything is sunshine and roses, but we have babies and a girl who has learned her lesson.
Now I have to decide if I want to rewrite it in first person or not...
I also need to go back through and make sure I changed all my genders and names properly. Continuity is my friend. And I have to foreshadow the dragonfly-winged faeries being a little more...hm, aggressive than you might expect. I'm not sure the subtleties of feeding the dragonfly-winged faeries sausage and the butterfly-winged ones strawberries will make a reader sit up and say "Huh, those ones are carnivorous and those other ones are vegetarians."
New ending is ended. I like it better. Not everything is sunshine and roses, but we have babies and a girl who has learned her lesson.
Now I have to decide if I want to rewrite it in first person or not...
I also need to go back through and make sure I changed all my genders and names properly. Continuity is my friend. And I have to foreshadow the dragonfly-winged faeries being a little more...hm, aggressive than you might expect. I'm not sure the subtleties of feeding the dragonfly-winged faeries sausage and the butterfly-winged ones strawberries will make a reader sit up and say "Huh, those ones are carnivorous and those other ones are vegetarians."
