Yeah, so...
Jun. 13th, 2005 08:35 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
agilebritI'm to the point in the Fred Ficathon entry where Spike and Fred are going out on their date. And I'm not sure whether I should show the actual date, or just a reaction shot of Fred, giddy in her apartment, afterwards. Yeah, yeah, show, don't tell, but I'm not sure that "showing" in this case will actually advance the plot or just bloat the word count, yanno? The date won't really tell us anything new and different about the characters or advance the plot, so my tendency is to leave it out. Scene breaks are my friend.
Or, it could just be that I'm being lazy. Heh.
Ah well. If I decide to do it later, there's nothing in the world that says I can't. I'm just really bad at schmoop. *repeats mantra* No angst, no angst, no angst...
And the![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
wes_stillness Wes&Justine challenge is over and done with, so I can post this:
Or, it could just be that I'm being lazy. Heh.
Ah well. If I decide to do it later, there's nothing in the world that says I can't. I'm just really bad at schmoop. *repeats mantra* No angst, no angst, no angst...
And the
wes_stillness Wes&Justine challenge is over and done with, so I can post this: