Arrant Nonsense

That the new story starts in exactly the wrong place. *headdesks* Seriously, you'd think I'd actually learn something when I went to panels on plotting at conventions--like what an "inciting incident" is.

Oh well. At least I caught it early, right?

I also realized that this may turn out much longer than I planned. Much, much longer. Like, novel-length longer.

Crap.

I have the beginnings of a new Story, which shall henceforth be referred to as "Chains." No, I have no idea how it ends, why do you ask? I'm sure it will tell me as time goes on.

I'm going to give Ben a break for awhile, while I figure out exactly what Janni needs to do in order to find him and what awful act she will have to commit to get him back. Because there has to be a cost for her too.