First Read-Through of Unquiet Neighbors Achievement Unlocked.

[agilebrit]

*squints*

And, honestly, the Hubby was right.

There's not a whole lot wrong with this thing. And what there was, I fixed. Easily.

I mean, I'll go through it a couple more times, and run it past the Usual Suspects, but it's pretty damn clean.

This makes me automatically suspicious. Remember, this was the last story I wrote for the NaNo project, and it gave me severe fits. It came in at 10,600 words and took a day longer to write than Angry Bitter Angel, which was 8,000 words longer.

So I'm not sure what this means. Other than, I'll poke it again and see what happens.

I guess.

Comments

[roseaponi.livejournal.com]

I really liked the premise for this one. I hope it finds a home! :)

[agilebrit.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

I think I've figured out a few things I need to do with it to make it stronger--bring my protag's issues more to the forefront than they are, for one. But, honestly, that won't take much tweaking at all. Which is kind of a nice sensation, honestly.