I figured out part of my problem with this scene.

[agilebrit]

I don't think I've ever written a fight from the POV of a bystander before. It's always been from the POV of a participant. So, couple that with the fact that Janni is a fiery wench and I'm emotionally stunted, and this is doubly difficult.

Well. Knowing what the problem is? Is half the battle. Now I just have to fix it.

...send booze.