No, see, that right there good and evocative writing. My guy is one-note because of bad writing. Which I will fix in edits, because the fact that he has a cat is now a plot point instead of just a Random!Kitty. He uses it to lure a little girl to her doom.
...oh, God, now I sound like a supervillain. I need to wrap this thing up and start the next one.
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Date: 2013-01-08 03:14 pm (UTC)...oh, God, now I sound like a supervillain. I need to wrap this thing up and start the next one.