I like it. A lot. It flows well and seems to hold together. One thing, maybe a mention of how the Slayers found out about the battle? Also... possibly more reaction from Gunn. I know he is battle hardened and all but these were his friends for years here... a little more freak-outedness might be in order.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2004-10-05 11:42 pm (UTC)One thing, maybe a mention of how the Slayers found out about the battle?
Also... possibly more reaction from Gunn. I know he is battle hardened and all but these were his friends for years here... a little more freak-outedness might be in order.
All in all though, i loved it.
Thank you.