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Aug. 6th, 2010 09:40 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
agilebritI just had a thought about what I thought was the "final scene" in the new!Ben&Janni story. That should not be the final scene, actually.
I mean, it's nice and stuff that Janni's going to let Ange borrow Ben once a month--but the scene with Ben finding Ange and giving her a yellow rose (for friendship) should be the next-to-last scene. The last one should find him back at home in the arms of his wife.
I'm an idiot.
Oh well. It's not like this thing will ever see the light of day anyway. I may not even bother to finish it, honestly. YES, I KNOW IT ATE A YEAR OF MY LIFE. SHUT UP.
I mean, it's nice and stuff that Janni's going to let Ange borrow Ben once a month--but the scene with Ben finding Ange and giving her a yellow rose (for friendship) should be the next-to-last scene. The last one should find him back at home in the arms of his wife.
I'm an idiot.
Oh well. It's not like this thing will ever see the light of day anyway. I may not even bother to finish it, honestly. YES, I KNOW IT ATE A YEAR OF MY LIFE. SHUT UP.
