I am a horrible person.
Jul. 7th, 2009 05:29 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
agilebritI just introduced a character in one of Ben's awful flashbacks, and she's awesome.
And then she dies.
And then Fifi dies, after Ben comes up from the flashback. And he can't do a blessed thing about it, because he can't even frakking move at that point. So, he gets to relive an Army buddy dying in front of him, while he's helpless to stop it, in technicolor glory--and then he gets to see someone else die in front of him whom he also can't help.
And I see you over there going "Buh? Who the Sam Hill is Fifi?" Wolf Girl.
Anyway. Guess what that kicks my wordcount up to?
80,000.
Whee!
And then she dies.
And then Fifi dies, after Ben comes up from the flashback. And he can't do a blessed thing about it, because he can't even frakking move at that point. So, he gets to relive an Army buddy dying in front of him, while he's helpless to stop it, in technicolor glory--and then he gets to see someone else die in front of him whom he also can't help.
And I see you over there going "Buh? Who the Sam Hill is Fifi?" Wolf Girl.
Anyway. Guess what that kicks my wordcount up to?
80,000.
Whee!
