Gaaaaaaah.

[agilebrit]

*beats Muse*

Okay, the KKBB/IM crossover sucks, y'all. It sucks big green mossy rocks.

I have one line I can salvage from this, to possibly cannibalize into something that doesn't suck.

Understand, before you read this line, that I've had two characters drop f-bombs in my fiction, ever. And they were in the same story. Also, I don't normally drop them in my own LJ. However, I think the situation here rather warrants it.

Character has just discovered other character, battered and bleeding and unconscious in a gutter in the rain:

"...calm down, fuck you, Perry, 'calm down,' he's freezing and soaking wet and covered in blood and he won't wake up and they said if I called an ambulance they'd kill him in front of me, so I think I'm entitled to a little hysteria here!"

Why, yes. I've just beat the living shit out of another character. I think I'm detecting a pattern here. *sigh*

Comments

[shaddyr]

Well, my dear - that line certainly intrigues, so even if you feel like you're beating your head against the wall, or beating the shit out of the chapter - you are succeeding in drawing the reader in.

JMHO.

I'm glad *someone* is writing, cuz the must left me high and dry months ago.

[agilebrit.livejournal.com]

Well, if you can call less than 800 words of utter crap "writing," I guess I am. LOL I realize that I just banged out 25000 words in a month and a half, so maybe I shouldn't be whining quite so much, but I get frustrated when the words won't com. I just hope WorldCon shakes something loose...