Gaaaaah....

[agilebrit]

Man. I suck at this.

*beats not!Iron Man fic*

Yeah, you know that love/hate relationship I usually have with my stories? Remember how much I loved this thing?

Now it just feels phoned in to me. I'm trying to figure out where and how to add more emotion (within the artificial strictures of my self-imposed wordcount), and I'm not finding it.

I. Cannot. Win.

Comments

[speakr2customrs.livejournal.com]

It feels phoned in to you because you've been over it so many times and it has lost its impact. Try it out on someone new and see how they react before you make any more changes.

[agilebrit.livejournal.com]

*ponders* That's a good notion. *wonders who I can inflict it on*