One minor thing - why is he popping his eyestalk back in his mouth? That's how the grammar reads; he dips one eyestalk down before popping it back into his mouth.
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Date: 2007-12-02 01:46 am (UTC)One minor thing - why is he popping his eyestalk back in his mouth? That's how the grammar reads; he dips one eyestalk down before popping it back into his mouth.