- Sat, 10:49: Diving into edits, three pages to go this round. Man, I should buy my Writing Buddy a BEER for looking at this mess. I am so sorry, Patrick.
- Sat, 11:05: And there's that scene done. Two more, ohgod.
- Sat, 11:47: That moment when you realize that you should probably re-write this entire scene from the ground up because it's all telling.