My tweets

• Thu, 21:02: So, there's an END at the bottom of this story. There is also something egregiously wrong with it that I can't pinpoint. ARGH.
• Thu, 22:37: I've put about half of it in past tense now. I think I know what's wrong with it. How to FIX that is a whole other issue.
• Thu, 23:16: No, really, I MEANT this to be a dry, emotionless retelling of events. Really. It's a police report, not a story.