- Sat, 15:23: TMW you realize that when you excised 150 words from the beginning, you also excised every last bit of your scene-setting. #amediting
- Sat, 18:44: Have done last editing pass on De-Wolfed Ben before handing it off to my Writing Buddy tonight. I'm pretty happy with it.
- Sat, 22:29: Got crit on the Chambliss story. Need to add words. It's 3 shy of 9K. I would like to not go over 9K. That's... not happening, apparently.
- Sat, 22:30: I guess what I'll do is add where I need to first, then see if and where I can cut. #amediting