Well.

The story has a "the end" at the bottom of it.

I'm not sure I'm happy with it.

And if I'm not sure I'm happy with it, that generally means that I'm unhappy with it.

Crap.

It's sitting at 1988 words. Naturally, it still needs a title. I think I'm going to put it to bed and look at it with fresh eyes in the morning. Maybe print it out and go over it with the Red Pen of Doom.

Le sigh...

Well.

The story has a "the end" at the bottom of it.

I'm not sure I'm happy with it.

And if I'm not sure I'm happy with it, that generally means that I'm unhappy with it.

Crap.

It's sitting at 1988 words. Naturally, it still needs a title. I think I'm going to put it to bed and look at it with fresh eyes in the morning. Maybe print it out and go over it with the Red Pen of Doom.

Le sigh...

*waves to flist*

Happy Thanksgiving to my Canadian friends! And yay for Columbus Day for us Americans. Other than the fact that the banks are closed, which, bah, because I need to pay for an eBay auction, but oh well.

Added a line to the HNC story, and it's now at 2000 words exactly. Heh.

*waves to flist*

Happy Thanksgiving to my Canadian friends! And yay for Columbus Day for us Americans. Other than the fact that the banks are closed, which, bah, because I need to pay for an eBay auction, but oh well.

Added a line to the HNC story, and it's now at 2000 words exactly. Heh.