You made me a teary eyed! Which is so not good in the workplace. It was all I could do keep from choking up.
I had to go re-read the original just so I could get the happy ending again.
Toss up which one I like better.
Good characterazation by the way! Sounds like you got both River & Jayne's voice without having them go all wibble-ly. And the fact it was mentioned that besides Book no one was really close to Jayne.
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Gah!
Date: 2005-11-15 04:48 pm (UTC)I had to go re-read the original just so I could get the happy ending again.
Toss up which one I like better.
Good characterazation by the way! Sounds like you got both River & Jayne's voice without having them go all wibble-ly. And the fact it was mentioned that besides Book no one was really close to Jayne.
Very nice.
Take a bow!