For such a short little piece it sure took long to read, had to keep stopping to wipe my eyes. I never am a fan of "deathfic" but you wrote Jayne true & I think that is very important.
The other ending will always be my favorite, however you did an excellent job, w/the imagery.
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Date: 2005-11-15 08:07 am (UTC)The other ending will always be my favorite, however you did an excellent job, w/the imagery.