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agilebrit ([personal profile] agilebrit) wrote2004-10-10 12:45 pm
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Here we go a-drabblin'....

Title: Poet
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Angel
Rating: PG
Length: Drabble (100 words)
Disclaimer: Joss is the genius behind these characters; I am but a lowly follower. I make no money from any of this, so please don't sue me.
Written for: [livejournal.com profile] wordoftheday100's "chagrin" challenge.


My sanguine princess
Delectable blood drips
Like jeweled wine
From her ruby lips.


"Oh! For me?" Dru clasped the poem to her heart. "I must show Daddy and Grandmother." Before he could stop her, she gave him a peck on the cheek and ran out. Every muscle tense, he heard her voice, a pause, then explosive laughter.

He dropped his head in chagrin. He could no more stop writing poetry than stop eating--but he wouldn't show it to anyone, ever again.

Dru flounced back into their room. "They enjoyed it quite a bit, sweet William. You must write more."

[identity profile] illmantrim.livejournal.com 2004-10-10 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
very cool, and how like Dru!

[identity profile] agilebrit.livejournal.com 2004-10-10 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Not sure if I should be disturbed over the fact that I like the unbalanced characters like Dru and Illyria best... LOL

[identity profile] illmantrim.livejournal.com 2004-10-10 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
grins a good sign of imagination eh?

[identity profile] agilebrit.livejournal.com 2004-10-10 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins back and laughs maniacally* Either that or I'm a bit unbalanced myself.

[identity profile] illmantrim.livejournal.com 2004-10-10 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
watches yer teeter totter*
Nothing wroing with unbalancing acts... it's the stop at the end of the fall that soemtimes accompanies unbalancing... thats the bad thing

[identity profile] hieispike.livejournal.com 2004-10-11 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oh poor sweet William.

This line was brilliant (but also quite painful):

He could no more stop writing poetry than stop eating--but he wouldn't show it to anyone, ever again.

[identity profile] agilebrit.livejournal.com 2004-10-11 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
*blush* Thank you!