agilebrit: (Don't make me beat you in the name of gr)
agilebrit ([personal profile] agilebrit) wrote2013-02-12 08:11 am
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I figured out part of my problem with this scene.

I don't think I've ever written a fight from the POV of a bystander before. It's always been from the POV of a participant. So, couple that with the fact that Janni is a fiery wench and I'm emotionally stunted, and this is doubly difficult.

Well. Knowing what the problem is? Is half the battle. Now I just have to fix it.

...send booze.
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