ext_15045 ([identity profile] agilebrit.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] agilebrit 2004-09-01 12:30 am (UTC)

Well, but your misspellings aren't a result of lazy writing. In the fic that inspired this rant, let's count the mini-trolls, shall we?

Lorin
Gun (or gun)
sunydale
Worfam and heart
Cordillia

She frequently forgets that a character's name should be capitalized. One of her OC's has "burnet" hair. Funny, I'd think that salad greens on one's head would be annoying, and you'd want to take care of that little problem sooner rather than later. And then there's a continuity error where "Lorin" apparently forgets that he met the girls just two (short) chapters before. At least it's not my Lorne being such an idiot.

There's no excuse for this. I can't even give it concrit, because there's absolutely nothing good to say about it. Not that she'd listen. Her little friends have given her ten fawning reviews.

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