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Another editing pass...
DONE. *squishes Mom & kicks Eudora (or whatever that email client she uses is) and Yahoo* By the way, Mom, those in-text [chapter break] things were there for reference and will be excised as soon as I decide where all of them are actually going. The three(?) I have in there are the ones that are definite.
I've also made a couple of improvements to my flashback scene. Physical reactions to fear for the win!
Also, I've cracked 95,000 words. \o/ And they're words in the middle rather than at the end, so my ending hasn't gotten more bloated than it already is.
And now I should probably dive into that opening sequence yet again. Because it still kind of sucks.
I've also made a couple of improvements to my flashback scene. Physical reactions to fear for the win!
Also, I've cracked 95,000 words. \o/ And they're words in the middle rather than at the end, so my ending hasn't gotten more bloated than it already is.
And now I should probably dive into that opening sequence yet again. Because it still kind of sucks.