ext_81149 (
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2007-10-17 02:01 am (UTC)
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Blah. I fail the writing thing tonight.
"only now they have $15,000 with which to do it."
should be "only now they have $15,000
less
with which to do it."
Also, "even close school" should be "even close
a
school"
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"only now they have $15,000 with which to do it."
should be "only now they have $15,000 less with which to do it."
Also, "even close school" should be "even close a school"