I figured out part of my problem with this scene.

I don't think I've ever written a fight from the POV of a bystander before. It's always been from the POV of a participant. So, couple that with the fact that Janni is a fiery wench and I'm emotionally stunted, and this is doubly difficult.

Well. Knowing what the problem is? Is half the battle. Now I just have to fix it.

...send booze.

My tweets

• Mon, 19:42: I just realized that Ben needs to call Janni "Hermia" somewhere in this piece, because that is a Thing with them, canonically. #amediting
• Mon, 23:06: This Friday at LTUE is going to be busy for me.… http://t.co/MJRJdCII
• Tue, 08:11: I figured out part of my problem with this scene.… http://t.co/M2znfyQf