You made me a teary eyed! Which is so not good in the workplace. It was all I could do keep from choking up.

I had to go re-read the original just so I could get the happy ending again.

Toss up which one I like better.

Good characterazation by the way! Sounds like you got both River & Jayne's voice without having them go all wibble-ly. And the fact it was mentioned that besides Book no one was really close to Jayne.

Very nice.

Take a bow!