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Arrant Nonsense
Wherein I whine about writing. A lot.
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Date:
2005-08-28 03:37 am (UTC)
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How was that a story? *shakes head in disbelief*
Frequent grammatical and spelling errors as well as a weak plot that won't let the characters be themselves is just... bad.
Good review. I hope the author takes what you said and either A) Corrects mistakes and rewrites story or B) Doesn't quit his/her day job
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Date: 2005-08-28 03:37 am (UTC)Frequent grammatical and spelling errors as well as a weak plot that won't let the characters be themselves is just... bad.
Good review. I hope the author takes what you said and either A) Corrects mistakes and rewrites story or B) Doesn't quit his/her day job